Narrative writing

 One day three months ago my cousin Kuirau came over to my house. 20 minutes later we asked if we could go for a swim down at the mudflats. We got a no because Kuirau had no change of clothes. I told them “Kuirau can just swim in my clothes” and then we got a yes so me,Sharky,Titan,and Kuirau went swimming. It was cold,soft,squishy, and rocky.

30 minutes later we got out of the water but we forgot our towel and after that we all got hit with a massive breeze.  We got cold as... I could see the goosebumps on everyone. We all ran up to the house, covered in mud which meant we all had to wash our legs in more cold water. 15 minutes later we started jamming the game NBA 2K21 feeling much warmer and cleaner!

Production

WALT: 

What did I like about the production? I liked waiting for our turn because we had free-time.

How did I feel? I felt all goods about.

What do I want to change? nothing really.

Human impact to chucks cove

 

How To Make A Good Blog Post

 Hi my name is Jasper and I will be telling you about how to write a good blog post. This is what makes me want to read a blog that is.

The writer has a hook in their writing.

Punctuation: is important because it tells the reader to stop and breath.

Editing. - editing is an important part of your writing because it makes sure that your writing has no mistakes in your writing so the reader can understand your writing.

Title. - the title needs to be catchy so the reader wants to read your blog.  It also needs to tell the reader what your blog is about so they can decide if they want to read it.

The blog needs to be written from the writer's point of view - this is called first person.

My goal

 My goal is not to be the person to ruin the play. I picked this for my goal because I sort of ruin the play sometimes. We had to design our goal I like my design it looks amazing.

Surfing

 WALT: connect with papatuanuku by exploring our local area.

REFLECTION: At the beach it was fun and I liked surfing but I keep on falling off the surfboard.

QUESTION: have you ever been surfing before?

My Site

 W.A.L.T synthesise texts with your own prior knowledge to develop new ideas and understandings.

Research facts about climate change and synthesis statements about the effects of climate change.

one thing that was easy was putting my site on my blog.

one thing that was hard was making my site.

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